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Well, what can I say? Ambiance is nice, the animation is lovely, teen males will likely be experiencing a new sensation.

My only complaint is the client's performance and dialogue. I get it, he's too infatuated with her girls to think of anything else, but it's coming across as if he's not even trying to climb out of the hole he fell in. I'm expecting something like...

"I-I mean breast milk. No, I mean, fox formula. WAIT! I meant, tit protein!! No-no, chest cream!!! Arg jee, POWDER BREAST MILK!!!"

He's already making a fool of himself, work up that goofy charm.

Do chinchillas really make that sound? I mean, I've had rabbits that make a similar sound when they grind their teeth, but...

Anyway, a lot of effort was placed in this (particularly the backgrounds), but it could use some touch-ups here and there. One such spot is after the chinchilla placed the soap on the pedestal, the music appeared to have 'hiccuped' after it faded out.

One of the benefits of having a simple designed character is that animating them will be easier and I noticed that you made it even more easier during that spiral dive. At a certain point, you mirrored the little guy so you only had to work with 180 degrees instead of 360. Understandable, however, that strap on his chest is what gives your trick away and the illusion of him spinning suffers because of it.

It's still a very nice animation, but some cut corners and slip ups were obviously noticeable.

Mordina responds:

Thanks for the criticism :)
If You like You can review my other videos. This series has second episode. I would be very appeiciated <3

Okay, I'll admit it, I did the same thing to all the time (why I did it I don't know, but I did). You did a wonderful job animating and a decent job drawing. ZStriefel also did a great job at getting the songs as well (it still kept that mario feel to it). In the end, it didn't make me laugh but it did leave an impression on me.

Glad to see somebody finally made words to this.

The animation is good and the jokes are funny too but the one I wish is that I knew all the symptoms are for all of these sicknesses.

That's it?

Well it was a good simple story, but it ended so abruptly. He goes into the time machine and stops himself from making the time machine, but when he enters we see the after effect that it did to the room, so what happen to him? Did machine vaporize him with itself? Did he make it to the past? Was he successful? It just feels like an unfinished story.

spanio responds:

I was going for ambiguity so that people could interpret the ending however they'd like.

OH NO!

I had the same idea in my head for quite a while. But it looks like you beat me to it and you did better then what I was thinking of.

What a story!

You did a great working with the voices to match up like the word "Shadic" and "Nazo", and speaking about match up you did an excellent job getting the music to match up with the animation. All in all, great job!

P.S. I saw that luigi was in it too, lol.

THE BIG GAY DANCE

You always get me with that joke. Anyways I loved every minute of it, especially Rina-chan returning, once agian, to Kirbopher.

P.S. Happy Brawl Taunts anniversary

awsome sprites

That demon metanight looked great, and I like how kirby might be Shadow's new sidekick (It seems like such an odd pair).

Shi-Gu responds:

Thanks, it didn't took so much time editing as it looks like XD
And I also love the idea of making Shadow and Kirby a permanent team, they're just so different that it's so funny! XD

Who were you expecting, Tom Fulp?

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