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Do chinchillas really make that sound? I mean, I've had rabbits that make a similar sound when they grind their teeth, but...

Anyway, a lot of effort was placed in this (particularly the backgrounds), but it could use some touch-ups here and there. One such spot is after the chinchilla placed the soap on the pedestal, the music appeared to have 'hiccuped' after it faded out.

One of the benefits of having a simple designed character is that animating them will be easier and I noticed that you made it even more easier during that spiral dive. At a certain point, you mirrored the little guy so you only had to work with 180 degrees instead of 360. Understandable, however, that strap on his chest is what gives your trick away and the illusion of him spinning suffers because of it.

It's still a very nice animation, but some cut corners and slip ups were obviously noticeable.

Mordina responds:

Thanks for the criticism :)
If You like You can review my other videos. This series has second episode. I would be very appeiciated <3

That's it?

Well it was a good simple story, but it ended so abruptly. He goes into the time machine and stops himself from making the time machine, but when he enters we see the after effect that it did to the room, so what happen to him? Did machine vaporize him with itself? Did he make it to the past? Was he successful? It just feels like an unfinished story.

spanio responds:

I was going for ambiguity so that people could interpret the ending however they'd like.

awsome sprites

That demon metanight looked great, and I like how kirby might be Shadow's new sidekick (It seems like such an odd pair).

Shi-Gu responds:

Thanks, it didn't took so much time editing as it looks like XD
And I also love the idea of making Shadow and Kirby a permanent team, they're just so different that it's so funny! XD

Who were you expecting, Tom Fulp?

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